Dear Kathy,
Thanks so much for your edits and suggestions! I'll be sure to keep writing
Owner Reviews, as well as fill out/send in the required tester paperwork.
Best,
Susan
--- In BackpackGearTest@yahoogroups.com, "theMiddleSister@..."
<TheMiddleSister@...> wrote:
>
> Susan,
>
>
>
> Thanks for submitting your second OR. Your HTML and pictures look good and
you are approved to delete the file from the test folder and upload to the
> proper link at:
http://www.backpackgeartest.org/reviews/Clothing/Shirts/Nike%20Base%20Layer%20Ha\
lf-Zip%20LS%20Ws%20Top/ or http://tinyurl.com/kltudg
>
>
> When uploading your Owner Review, please ensure you select the button marked
Owner Review. If you require assistance with your upload, please ask in our
> Yahoo! support group, BGTFileUploadHelp at
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/BGTFileUploadHelp/.
>
> Also, don't forget to delete your test file in the OR test folder, please.
>
>
>
> As this is your second approved review, if you have submitted a Tester
Agreement, for which see:
>
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/BackpackGearTest/files/1%20BGT-Tester%20Agreement%\
20Docs/
> that has been acknowledged, you are now eligible to participate in the testing
process by applying for tests. If you have not sent your paperwork in, please do
so at your earliest opportunity.
>
> For further details see:
> http://www.backpackgeartest.org/lesson.php?lesson=BecomeTester&page=9
>
> You will also need to join:
> http://groups.yahoo.com/group/backpackgeartesters/. This is where
> everything related to Tests and Testing takes place.
>
> Please don't stop writing Owner Reviews. The more Owner Reviews you write,
the better you will get at report writing and this won't go unnoticed when
> Test Moderators are choosing testers.
>
> Congratulations!
>
>
> Kathy Waters
> BGT OR Editor
> ______________________________
>
>
>
>
> MSRP: US$ 48.00 (currently on sale for US$ 29.99 on manufacturer's website)
>
> EDIT: Delete the information in the brackets. Only MSRPs can be posted.
When this OR is read two years (or two weeks) from now, the sale price will not
be relevant.
>
>
>
> Measured Weight: (to be updated for final post)
>
> COMMENT: Don't Forget!!!
>
>
>
> The shirt has an 8.5 in (21.6 cm) chest zipper, with a opaque, sturdy (but
flexible) plastic zipper pull.
>
> EDIT: Change to "an opaque".
>
>
>
> A 1 in (2.5 cm) piece of fabric runs behind the entire length of the zipper,
and a small rectangular piece even folds over the zipper's neck opening to
prevent the metal zipper from directly touching the wearer's neck.
>
> EDIT: Really nit-picky, but in first ORs I tend to be very strict to whip
newbies into shape for test reports - Change "the wearer's neck" to "my neck" to
reflect your OWN experience and not slip into "projection".
>
>
>
> The shirt's only reflective material comes in the form of a 1.25 in (3.2 cm)
by .5 in (1.3 cm) elasticized grey reflector tab that sits just below the back
neck seam and also doubles as a shirt-hanging hook.
>
> EDIT: You need a leading zero when the measurement consists of only a decimal
point and numbers. i.e., "0.5 in".
>
>
>
> When considering the purchase, I was immediately drawn to its softness, and
even after owning it for 2+ years and putting it through who-knows-how-many
washing machine cycles, it has remained pile-free and just as soft when I
purchased it.
>
> Edit/Comment: This could just be a matter of regional jargon, but I think you
mean "pill-free" as in when little balls of fabric form on material. If that is
not what you would say, let it be, but if it is just a misspelling, please
change.
>
>
>
> In addition to its softness, I also like its weight and thickness. I have
used the shirt in temperatures ranging from 20 deg F ( -7 deg C) to 90 deg F (32
deg C).
>
> EDIT: Drop "deg" from your measurements and also the extra space between (
and -7.
>
>
>
> For example, during a hiking and climbing trip to Joshua Tree National Park,
CA in May of 2008, when temperatures ranged from 65 deg F (18 deg C) in the
shade to 80 deg F (27 deg C) in the sun, I wore the shirt as either an extra
layer of warmth or an extra layer of sun protection depending on whether I was
in the sun or not.
>
> EDIT: Ditto above edit on "deg".
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
>
> [Non-text portions of this message have been removed]
>