Okay, and maybe the Suberb Squad can meet Captain Carrot and crew sometime! laughing out loud Wolf! ... ===== ^ ^ * * (-) ...
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mcmaenza
Oct 1, 2003 2:11 pm
... time ... I guess this gives a whole new meaning to Florence Jean Castleberry's catch phrase - "when donkeys fly!" <wink>...
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starsky_hutch76
Oct 1, 2003 3:29 pm
... Castleberry's ... It would've been fun if Ralphie had recognized the Superb Squad. Maybe they were the theme of one of his childhood birthday parties....
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libbylawrence
Oct 1, 2003 5:53 pm
This tale might be a good one in which to use Kirby's Sandman. I know Doc had plans for him once....
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mcmaenza
Oct 2, 2003 2:01 pm
... know ... From Doc's last update on the writer's group, it appeared to me that he's awful busy right now and did not know when he would next be able to...
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starsky_hutch76
Oct 2, 2003 3:07 pm
I think we had talked about the dreaming as a sort of bridge between dimensions with Farrett Sanford on the other side of that bridge at E- 1. ... that ... ...
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bejammin2000
Oct 3, 2003 10:29 pm
"Miss Jordan, I know that Britain's Great Criminal Trials is not the most… exciting subject, but please, pay attention. I'm just trying to do my job." A...
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mcmaenza
Oct 3, 2003 11:12 pm
B - I remember having one of the guys across the hall from me in college back in 1985/1986 who was heavy into Japanese anime (Robotech, etc.) and he had much...
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PixieP
pixiep2003
Oct 4, 2003 1:39 am
... a ... You never know...maybe somebody can make that drawing of Air Wave exist if you know what I mean Tee!Hee!Hee!!! PixieP Master of the Mystical...
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bejammin2000
Oct 4, 2003 3:15 am
... you up to it then Pixie? -B...
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The Master Creator
arcademan88
Oct 5, 2003 1:34 am
... Ask and ye shall receive!!! A sketch drawing of Ilyssa Jordan as the next legacy Air Wave can be found in the photo album. A work in progress ;o) Arcademan...
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mcmaenza
Oct 5, 2003 3:12 am
... the ... Arcade, very nice....
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bejammin2000
Oct 6, 2003 9:24 pm
"It's not that big of an explosion." Fireball said. It was his time for glory and infamy, a goal that no body would prevent him from accomplishing. "Yes, I...
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The Master Creator
arcademan88
Oct 7, 2003 1:30 am
Talk about going from the frying pan into the fire LOL!!! Great job. Lookng forward to the next chapter ;o) Arcademan The Master Creator Master of the Clow...
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BLACKWOLF
blackwolf247
Oct 7, 2003 12:29 pm
... It is a good thing the Air Wave costume is fireproof! Hmm mspeaking of that though I know Superman's is also but Wildcat had better be careful.... good...
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mcmaenza
Oct 7, 2003 2:13 pm
It's been good to see new stories over here. For so long, the E-2 club has been quiet or dragging. I think a concentrated effort to finish off some of the...
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bejammin2000
Oct 7, 2003 9:37 pm
"Nothin' happened! Not much of a way to get rid of Supes, if you ask me." Wildcat said. "That's because it didn't. I just detonated a few dozen more of my ...
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mcmaenza
Oct 7, 2003 11:10 pm
... you ... Actually, Superman is skilled enough and still faster than a speeding bullet, able enough to have knocked out Fireball while he was bragging and...
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bejammin2000
Oct 7, 2003 11:42 pm
... firebombs. ... veteran ... I'm sorry that you feel that way. Most of my writing is like that, you have to look for clues in the passages. Like how Air...
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mcmaenza
Oct 7, 2003 11:59 pm
B, I'm sorry if it sounded like I was coming down hard on you, but you did seem to be patting yourself on the back at the end of your chapter AND you asked for...
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mcmaenza
Oct 8, 2003 12:00 am
Gang, sorry for the double post. I deleted the extra one....
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bejammin2000
Oct 8, 2003 12:13 am
I didn't want to talk about this, but I was thinking about it and it seemed that it was an important fact. Go back and look at a lot of Fireball's dialog....
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drivtaan
Oct 8, 2003 2:39 am
Fear the Dark pt 63 Harewave led Ralph and his pals in the Superb Squad past several doors. Eventually, he began to drag the toe of the left skate behind him...
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mcmaenza
Oct 8, 2003 8:47 am
... often ... off ... All, I apologize if any of my comments came on too strong. I was only trying to help out a new writer with constructive criticism. I ...
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BLACKWOLF
blackwolf247
Oct 8, 2003 12:29 pm
... Well I'll tell you what this here is a fine story, and I think a really good exploration of what motivates someone to become a villian, I loved how you had...
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BLACKWOLF
blackwolf247
Oct 8, 2003 12:54 pm
... Hey Ben fight scenes are difficult to write, take it from someone who has done it! I myself saw nothing wrong with Fireball taking out Wildcat then being...
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BLACKWOLF
blackwolf247
Oct 8, 2003 1:01 pm
... snipping heavily [sorry martin] I do agree with all of his points, write write write! I write my stories out longhand after working em out in my head then...
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mcmaenza
Oct 8, 2003 1:06 pm
... No offense here, Blackwolf. Thanks for snipping as I tend to go on and on. ;)...
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blackwolf247
Oct 8, 2003 2:00 pm
... We all can do that time to time. Hey its why we'er writers after all! By the by Martin I didn't think your comments were heavy handed but rather right on...
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mcmaenza
Oct 8, 2003 2:21 pm
... Wolf it is. I'll try to remember that. And thanks. Martin...
