If I may make a suggestion, tighten up the first paragraph and have all relevant info in there, most people don t really read beyond headlines and first paraMessage 1 of 38 , Apr 1, 2005View SourceIf I may make a suggestion, tighten up the first paragraph and have all
relevant info in there, most people don't really read beyond headlines
and first para and conclusion. So explaining why science is in quotes
prolly belongs to para 2. I seem to have missed most of this debate as
I was away so I do apologize for my next query if it's silly: but what
exactly happened? Was there a previous article/event? :)
>State that something, it might help. EG what is the university's motto?
> As a university, Carleton is supposed to stand for
Something about honesty etc? That would be very effective.
PS love the title!
Lee Graham wrote:Message 38 of 38 , Apr 10, 2005View Source
Lee Graham <lee@...> wrote:
It's as if the university were primarily just a bunch of buildings. Sure, we educate and do science research, but just sort of.. on the side.
ME: When you're not busy with anything else, right? <laugh>
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